Comments on the Blog Entries for Section 2
Alesis
Grade 1 - 91
Post 1 78
An OK post--a bit on the short side. Could be a bit more detailed. The bulleted style makes for disjunct reading.
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Comment 1 - 8
Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 - 78
Post 2 - 72
The topic of this post is great. The first sentence has several grammatical errors and a few other errors sprinkled throughout the post. The post is a bit short.
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Comment 2 - 6
Grade 3 - 86
Post 3 - 80
Interesting article you found! Good post.
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Comment 3 - 6
Grade 4 - 87
Post 4 - 75
Interesting article, though a bit short.
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Comment 5 (4b4-943) - 6
Grade 5 - 82
Post 5 - 82
Good post. (a bit short)
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Grade 6 - 83
Post 6 - 77
Reasonable post - a bit short
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Comment 6 (4b3-936) - 6
Grade 7
Post 7 -82
Good post
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Grade 8
Post 8 - 78
Good post but a bit short
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Grade 9 - 84
Post 9 84
Good post
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Grade 10 - - 84
Post 10 - 84
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Grade 11 - 90
Post 11 - 85
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Grade 12 - 90
Post 12 - 85
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Post 13 - giving 10 points added to above 2 posts
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Audacity
Grade 1 - 96
Post 1 - 82
An good, well-written, summary of this topic.
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Comment 1 - 9
Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 - 92
Post 2 - 84
Wow. Good, interesting post. Thanks!
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Comment 2 - 8
Grade 3 - 90
Post 3 - 83
Yet another in your series of good posts.
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Comment 2 - 7
Grade 4 - 92
Post 4 - 86
Comment 4 - 6
Very good. The information was presented extremely well. Plus it was interesting.
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Grade 5 - 93
Post 5 - 87
Excellent summary.
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Comment 5 - 6
Grade 6 - 94
Post 6 - -87
Good post about an important site. Thanks!
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Comment 6 - 7
Grade 7 - 95
Post 7 - 89
Good post and nice tie in with media literacy
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Comment 7 - 6
Grade 8 0 95
Post 8 - 89
Great post. thanks
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Comment 8 - 6
Grade 9 - 100
Post 9 - 88
Cool post!
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Comment 9 - 6
Comment 10 - 6
Grade 10 - 100
Post 10 - 88
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Comment 11 (4b2) - 6
Comment 12 (4b2) - 6
Grade 11 - 94
Post 11 - 88
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Grade 12 -88
Post 12 - 88
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Cubase
Grade 1 -87
Post 1 -76
This post is okay, but it is a bit short and uninspired. There isn't sufficient information in your post for the reader to get a good sense of the article you read.
Comment 1 - 6
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Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 - 79
Post 2 - 72
Generally, a good post. A few typos (there when you intended their and it when you intended if)
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Comment 2 - 7
Grade 3 - 84
Post 3 - 71
Reasonable post. There are typos. For example, the third sentence has a typo. The fourth sentence is ungrammatical as it is incomplete. First sentence of the fourth paragraph is ungrammatical. It would be a wonderful post if these errors were not present.
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Comment 3 - 6
Comment 4 - 7
Grade 4 - 82
Post 4 - 76
An ok, solid post.
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Comment 5 - 6
Grade 5 - 87
Post 5 - 81
Good post.
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Comment 6 - 6
Grade 6 - 82
Post 6 - 76
Great post. There are a few errors. For ex., the first sentence after the quote is not grammatical as is the last sentence of the post. You use the word birth when you intended berth
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Grade 7 - 92
Post 7 - 86
Great post.
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Comment 8 (4b4) - 6
Grade 8
Post 8 - 80
Good Post
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Grade 9
Post 9 - 86
Cool (well written) 403-0dd8d33188fc39e959fd5c4179ef58f3
Grade 10
Post 10 - 90
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Grade 11
Post 11 - 84
Great post.
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Grade 12 - 84
Post 12 - 84
Another great post
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Garageband
Grade 1 - 92
Post 1 - 78
Great Summary! The formatting is a bit unusual but the content is good.
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Comment 1 - 9
Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 - 88
Post 2 - 81
A solid post. There are little fixes that could be made that would make this post better. For example, I know what you mean in your first sentence but it could be reworded to make your idea come across -- the current PP that starts the sentences just doesn't seem connected to the rest of the sentence. The third paragraph lacks focus. In comparison the fourth paragraph is very good.
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Comment 2 - 7
Grade 3 - 89
Post 3 - 81
Good post! df68637963ae27440eb09f20b9ff1314
Comment 3 - 8
Grade 4 - 91
Post 4 - 85
This is great. Thanks!
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Comment - 6
Grade 5 - 87
Post 5 - 81
Good post though not that related to the class.
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Comment 7 - 6
Grade 6 - 82
Post 6 - 82
Good post
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Grade 7
Post 7 - 84
Good!
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Grade 8
Post 8 - 84
Neat post. Thanks.
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Grade 9
Post 9 - 87
Great post.
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Grade 10
Post 9 - 90
Good post.
Korg
Grade 1 - 90
Post 1 - 76
Reasonably good summary. Read a bit as stream-of-thought writing. For example, in the second paragraph. the topic switches from one topic to another and then back again.
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Comment 1 - 9
Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 - 86
Post 2 - 79
A good post. There is a small typo in the fourth line from the end. You selected a great article. It would be nice if you expanded your blog post a bit more. Thanks!
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Comment 2 - 7
Grade 3 - 87
Post 3 - 81
Good Post! It made me click on the link you provided and read the original article. Thanks!
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Comment 3 - 6
Grade 4 - 91
Post 4 - 79
An interesting find. The post itself was good, but a bit short.
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Comment 4 - 6
Comment 4b - 6
Grade 5 - 90
Post 5 - 84
Good post! It was interesting enough that I went to the site you mentioned.
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Comment 5 - 6
Grade 6 - 101
Post 6 - 89
Great post & good research
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Comment 6 - 6
Comment 7 - 6
Grade 7 -97
Post 7 -85
Great post. You have one formatting problem and a consistent typo (periods go inside quotes)
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Comment 9 (456) - 6
 
Grade 8 - 84
Post 8 - 78
Interesting but a bit short
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Comment 10 (4B1) - 6
Grade 9 - 92
Post 9 - 86
Great find! Thanks
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Comment 11 - 6
Kurzweil
Grade 1 - 95
Post 1 -82
Excellent summary & good writing!
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Comment 1 - 2 Comment 1b - 6
Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 - 89
Post 2 - 83
Good find! A bizarre case. A very good blog post! Thanks
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Comment 2 - 6
Grade 3 -94
Post 3 - 88
A great post!
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Comment 3 - 6
Grade 4 - 95
Post 4 - 83
Good writing about these new features. Thanks!
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Comment 4 - 6
Comment 5 - 6
Grade 5 - 96
Post 5 - 90
a wonderful post
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Comment 6 - 6
Grade 6 - 95
Post 6 - 89
Great! Ties in nicely with the video we just watched.
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Comment 7 (459) - 6
Grade 7 - 95
Post 7 - 89
Great Post. Thanks!
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Comment 8 (407) - 6
Grade 8 - 91
Post 8 - 85
Comment 9 (460) - 6
Good
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Grade 9 - 101
Post 9 - 90
great post
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Comment 11 (4b3) - 5
Grade 10 -95
Post 10 - 83
Good post.
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Comment 12 (4b3) - 6
Comment 13 (4b3) - 6
Grade 11 - 86
Post 11 - 86
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Grade 12 - 85
Post 12 - 85
Great!
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Live
Grade 1 - 93
Post 1 - 82
A good summary
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Comment 1 - 6
Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 -90
Post 2 -83
Good post & well written. eaa9d2b36969608aa880ff98649cc68d
Comment 2 - 7
Grade 3 - 92
Post 3 - 81
Good post. 64d8bcfa83e9864930070f122248a90d
Comment 3 - 6
Comment 4 - 5
Grade 4
Post 4 - 85
Good. Thanks!
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Comment 5 - 6
Grade 5 - 88
Post 5 -76
Good find! This is a neat idea. There are some grammatical errors in the post. For example, the second sentence of the second paragraph has an agreement error.
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Comment 7 - 6
Grade 6 87
Post 6 - 82
Good post. You raise a good point!
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Comment 8 (451) - 5
Grade 7 - 88
Post 7 - 82
Good
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Comment 9 (451) -6
Grade 8
Post 8 - 80
Good post - a bit short.
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Grade 9 - 91
Post 9 - 79
Reasonable post.
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Comment 11 - (3b3-904) - 6
Grade 10 - 77
Post 10 - 77
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Grade 10 - 77
Post 10 -77
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Grade 11 - 82
Post 11 - 82
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Grade 12 - 82
Post 12 - 82
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Max
Grade 1 - 82
Post 1 -77
A reasonable summary
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Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 - 85
Post 2 - 79
Good post! The post would benefit from more proof reading. For example, you use every when you intended very. e73622b9c1149222a359b4c1d1009ca6
Comment 1 - 6
Grade 3
Post 3 - 74
Good. There are several typos and you have a few sentence structures that are not parallel.
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Moog
Grade 1
Post 1 - 80
An okay post. There are a few grammatical problems. You have several agreement errors, you use a plural when you intended a possessive and one sentence has too many noun phrases. A final proofread would have helped.
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Initial bonus - 5
Comment 1 - 5
 
Grade 2 - 70
Post 2 - 70
Reasonable post. There are several grammatical errors. cf3868f15d455911c5adca4f1a0e7b3d
Reason
Grade 1 - 84
Post 1 - 70
The content is reasonably good. Some sentences are not syntactically correct. For example, the second and fourth sentences are ungrammatical. You also have agreement errors (e.g., single subject, plural verb) and at least one case of an incorrect determiner.
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Comment 1 - 9
Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 - 78
Post 2 - 71
Your ideas are great and you found an interesting article. Your blog entry could vastly be improved by eliminating typos. For example, your first sentence has an agreement error. The second sentence is ungrammatical. The second sentence of the second paragraph is also ungrammatical. The energy in the post is great--what you write about sounds exciting.
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Comment 2 - 7
Grade 3 - 73
Post 3 -68
This post would be fantastic if you removed all the grammatical errors. Most sentences have errors. I would recommend going to the writing center. You have great idea and just need a bit of assistance with grammar.
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Grade 4 - 89
Post 4 - 72
An interesting post. There are still grammatical errors although I think the number has decreased compared to previous posts.
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Comment 5 - 6
Comment 5b - 5
Grade 5 - 95
Post 5 - 83
Great post!!
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Comment 6 - 6
Comment 6b - 6
Grade 6 - 92
Post 6 - 72
Interesting post. There are a number of grammatical errors including subject-verb agreement errors.
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Grade 7 - 93
Post 7 - 71
The ideas are good. There are grammatical errors. For example, the first sentence has an agreement error and it also is a run-on sentence.
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Comment 13 - 5
Grade 8 - 95
Post 8 - 78
Reasonable post. Thanks.
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Comment 15 - 5
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Grade 9 - 91
Post 9 - 80
Good post and right on topic!
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Comment 17 (459) - 5
Grade 10 - 93
Post 10 - 77
good but some typos
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Comment 20 (452) - 6
Grade 11 -91
Post 11 - 82
Good post. interesting find.
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Grade 12 - 104
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Riffworks
Grade 1 - 77
Post 1 -68
An okay post. Some of your word choices are incorrect. For example, you should be using the term copyright (no space) and without (again, no space). Also, in your second paragraph you use a possessive when you wanted a plural. The length of the post is a bit short.
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Comment 1 - 4
Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 -74
Post 2 -74
Interesting post. There are a few grammatical errors including using a possessive when you intended a plural and agreement errors. 968777da642d5fa4236aa0b324b31502
Comment 2 - 5
Grade 3 - 73
Post 3 - 68
An okay post. Yet again some grammatical errors. Also a bit short. aa17f91927a1bac198f8df23b4b9e698
Comment 3 - 5
Grade 4 - 84
Post 4 - 78
A good post. There are no grammatical errors.
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Comment 4 - 6
Grade 5 - 82
Post 5 - 76
Good but quite short.
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Comment 5 - 6
Grade 6 - 78
Post 6 - 72
an okay post. Some things are not grammatical (e.g., last sentence of first paragraph). Other sentences could be worded better to get your ideas across.
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Comment 6 (456) - 6
Grade 7 -84
Post 7 - 78
Good post
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Comment 7 (405) - 6
Grade 8 -84
Post 8 - 79
A reasonable post
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Comment 8 (405) - 5
Grade 9 -81
Post 9 - 77
An ok post though a bit short
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Comment 9 (45f) - 4
Grade 10 - 72
Post 10 - 72
A bit short & not that related to class - interesting though
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Grade 11 - 74
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Grade 12
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Roland
Grade 1 - 98
Post 1 -86
Wow. Great. Your post is very good. It's just not a summary listing of the tiny facts but you see the big picture and express it well.
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Comment 1 - 7
Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 -83
Post 2 -77
This looked really interesting, then I got bogged down with spelling errors in first paragraph. After that things look great. It would be nice to have a paragraph expressing your opinion. Good selection!
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Grade 3 - 83
Post 3 - 77
not that related to the topic of the course, but a good post
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Comment 3 (460) - 6
Grade 4 - 84
Post 4 - 84
Good post.
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Grade 5 - 79
Post 5 - 79
Good post
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Grade 6 -83
Post 6 - 83
Good 406-1da3459c9d84599f5c485aa3e491e14f
Grade 7 - 85
Post 7 - 85
Great post
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Grade 8 - 94
Post 8 - 84
good post - weird story 404-b28b6c881bccb76763698a294236a041
Grade 9
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Wow. Great post. Thanks 460-146b8abc686dbcec9efbb93fe3ff9d03
Theremin
Grade 1 - 89
Post 1 - 78
A good summary. It would be nice to describe the larger picture (the bigger idea) this work is about. Although, what you have there is good and clear.
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Comment 1 - 6
Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 - 82
Post 2 - 76
A good post marred by typos. There are a number of possessives missing an apostrophe. Even though it is a blog, it would be good not to be so informal about capitalization. It would also be good to be clear about what the author said versus your opinion about it. 52f157c212d52a4194fc3f11d03a3411
Comment 2 - 6
Grade 3 - 82
Post 3 - 76
An okay post. It would be stronger if you could tie it in to the topic of the course.
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Comment 3 - 6
Grade 4 - 84
Post 4 - 78
Very good, but a bit short. It would be nice to have your opinion about this.
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Comment 4 - 6
Grade 5 -82
Post 5 - 76
Interesting post marred by some typos. First sentence not grammatical. In second you use soul when you intended sole. Further in your entry you use there when you intended their
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Comment 5 - 6
Grade 6 -80
Post 6 - 74
Good post. First sentence has an agreement error. 2nd sentence is also ungrammatical.
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Comment 6 - 6
Grade 7 - 89
Post 7 - 83
Great post (and funny video) 406-35646834fdb3c20dea72baabb36e2892
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Grade 8 - 95
Post 8 - 83
Good post.
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Grade 9 - 82
Post 9 - 82
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Grade 10 - 84
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Yamaha
Grade 1 - 96
Post 1 - 84
Great, clearly written summary.
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Comment 1 - 7
Initial bonus - 5
Grade 2 - 93
Post 2 - 87
Fantastic! And well written
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Comment 2 - 6
Grade 3 - 95
Post 3 - 84
Interesting find. Thanks 795ffb53dc6b9e732bccea3dafd07dc7
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Comment 4 - 6
Grade 4 - 98
Post 4 - 86
Very good and well written! About midway through (4th paragraph) you state a fact—I would be nice to cite where you got that info
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Comment 6 - 6
Grade 5 - 83
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A good post
Grade 6 - 89
Post 6 - 77
A bit short but good.
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Grade 7 - 87
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