Blogging Comments Section 1

Note: Blog grade for each column of the grading spreadsheet consists of 90 possible points for a blog entry and 10 for a blog comment. So if you see something like 76 and you haven't yet posted a comment, that is 76/90 or around 84%.

Alesis

Grade 1 - 98

Post 1 - 86

Great post!

Comment 1 - 7

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 91

Post 2 -83

Good pick and nice blog entry.

Comment 2 - 8

Grade 3 - 96

Post 3 -82

Good. It's a complex topic and you did a reasonable job explaining it, but it could have been a tad clearer. I liked how you tied this in to a previous post. Next time it would be good to make the link a real link you can click on.

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Comment 3 - 7

Comment 4 - 7

Grade 4 - 91

Post 4 - 83

Good and interesting post. Thanks.

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Comment 5 - 8

Grade 5 - 91

Post 5 - 84

Good Post

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Comment 6 - 7

Grade 6 - 93

Post 6 - 86

Good. I like your opinions in this one.

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Comment 7 - 7

Grade 7 -92

Post 7 - 84

Good.

Comment 8 - 8

Grade 8 - 95

Post 8 - 89

Great! Odd twist on the dmca.

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Comment 9 - 6

Grade 9 -99

Post 9 - 87

Good! Your posts are consistently great.

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Comment 10 (459) - 6

Comment 11 (451) - 6

Grade 10 - 100

Post 10 - 88

Great!

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Comment 12 (451) - 6

Comment 13 (403) - 6

Grade 11 - 92

Post 11 - 86

yet another good post

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Comment 14 (45d) 6

Grade 12 - 96

Post 12 - 90

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Comment 15 (464) - 6

Audacity

Grade 1 -97

Post 1 - 86

Good post! The summary could have been expanded and perhaps an example could be given. But in general, good.

Comment 1 - 6

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 90

Post 2 - 83

Good, interesting post

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Comment 2 - 7

Grade 3 94

Post 3 - 81

Good post. Well written. Would have liked to see you tie this in more with the topic of the course. I think that would have been very possible. Interesting find!

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Comment 3 - 7

Comment 4 - 6

Grade 4 92

Post 4 - 80

Reasonably good post. Fairly well written. Generally solid. It could be improved by you offering some opinion.

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Comment 5 - 6

Comment 6 - 6

Grade 5 - 96

Post 5 - 89

Fantastic post. Well written.

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Comment 7 - 7

Grade 6 - 94

Post 6 - 87

Good. Just a nit-picking point but on word processors you shouldn't put 2 spaces after a sentence. This was only true with typewriters and is no not considered good style.

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Comment 8 - 7

Grade 7 - 94

Post 7 - 82

Good Post. Some parts are slightly confusing. For example, it would be good to go into more detail about what you meant in the first sentence.

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Comment 9 (457) - 6

Comment 10 (450) - 6

Grade 8 - 93

Post 8 - 87

Great

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Comment 11 (403) - 6

Grade 9 - 90

Post 9 - 84

Good

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Comment 11 (45e) 6

Grade 10

Post 10 - 84

Interesting post 462-c92d766cc77d9a79052f7d4f232bf8e7

Grade 11 - 90

Post 11 - 90

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Cakewalk

Grade 1 - 87

Post 1 - 76

Pretty good. The text is a bit choppy and doesn't hang together as a whole. It lacks what I would call flow. Sorry for such a vague critique.

Comment 1 - 6

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 95

Post 2 - 83

Very interesting post and well-written.

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Comment 2 - 6

Comment 3 - 6

Grade 3 - 91

Post 3 - 83 Good 403-0f88f12ce375513c9f36e9231231c782

Comment 4 - 8

Grade 4 - 83

Post 4 - 83

Good post!

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Grade 5 - 88

Post 5 - 82

Good.

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Comment 5 (45d) - 6

Grade 6

Post 6 - 92

great post 45f-ad10f406a8044371b03a2827f0d57559

Comment 6 (4b3) - 6

Grade 7 - 96

Post 7 - 90

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Comment 7 (4b3) - 6

Grade 8 - 84

Post 8 - 84

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Grade 9 - 90

Post 9 - 90

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Cubase

Grade 1 91

Post 1 - 86

Hey this is great. Nice summary of the article and a decent critique!

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 87

Post 2 - 78

Good. Somewhat related to class. Interesting twist.

Comment 1 - 5

Comment 2 - 4

Grade 3 - 85

Post 3 - 73

Decent post. A bit short.

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Comment 3 - 6

Comment 4 - 6

Grade 4

Post 4 - 76

Good

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Grade 5 - 77

Post 5 -77

Good post.

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Grade 6 - 90

Post 6 - 90

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Garageband

Grade 1 - 83

Post 1 - 75

Reasonable. A bit short (200 words compared to the required 600-1000 words)

Initial bonus - 5

Comment 1 - 3

Grade 2 - 76

Post 2 -76

ok post 4b3-be23e11e84dc07e20905394c40ae9763

Korg

Grade 1 - 89

Post 1 -78

Reasonably good. Doing any proofreading would have helped. For example, you say there are "three things" but only list 2. You use a comparative in paragraph 4 but it is unclear what is being compared. There are a number of misspellings.

Comment 1 - 6

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 -92

Post 2 - 87

Excellent post. Well-written. Well thought out. Thanks.

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Comment 2 - 5

Grade 3 - 80

Post 3 - 74

Reasonable post. some grammatical errors.

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Comment 3 - 6

Grade 4 - 90

Post 4 - 90

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Grade 5 - 81

Post 5 - 81

Good post - it could be longer!

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Grade 6 - 90

Post 6 - 90

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Grade 7 - 83

Post 7 - 83

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Kurzweil

Grade 1 - 87

Post 1 -78

A bit short. A final proofread would have helped (misspelling on first line of post and other misspellings).

Comment 1 - 4

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 82

Post 2 - 72

A bit short. Some misspellings.

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Comment 2 - 5

Comment 3 - 5

Grade 3 - 75

Post 3 - 66

A great number of typos. Late submission

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Comment 4 - 4

Comment 5 - 5

Grade 4 - 83

Post 4 - 73

Good post. A few typos. For example you have car when you intended bar

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Comment 6 - 6

Comment 7 - 4

Grade 5 - 87

Post 5 71

Numerous typos.

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Comment 8 (456) - 5

Comment 9 (456) - 5

Comment 10 (45e) - 6

Grade 6 -72

Post 6 - 72

Very short and a number of misspellings.

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Grade 7 - 75

Post 7 - 75

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Live

Grade 1 - 79

Post 1 -68

Post is a bit short and the summary could be better. There are some typos.

Initial bonus - 5

Comment 1 - 6

Grade 2 - 74

Post 2 - 68

Good find. You do have typos. Late submission. bc1379f764e5d0a00c843a990940442d

Comment 2 - 6

Grade 3

Post 3 - 67

An interesting post but there are a fair amount of typos and the general structure of the post could use some work. Late submission

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Grade 4 - 82

Post 4 - 82

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Grade 5 - 82

Post 5 - 82

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Moog

Grade 1 - 87

Post 1 -75

Pretty good. Fourth sentence from the end did you mean legal instead of illegal?

Comment 1 - 7

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 86

Post 2 - 71

Good post. A bit short

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Comment 2 - 7

Comment 3 - 7

Grade 3 - 86

Post 3 - 74

A reasonable post though a bit short. You have several grammatical errors.

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Comment 4 - 6

Comment 5 - 6

Grade 4 -80

Post 4 - 74

Interesting post

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Comment 6 - 6

Grade 5 - 77

Post 5 - 77

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Grade 6 - 75

Post 6 - 75

a good post but short. 4b3-056a4ab5852cec31f9bd8df2756ff981

Grade 7 - 71

Post 7 - 71

too short.

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Grade 8 - 65

Post 8 - 65

too many entries in the week (this and those following) 4b3-1acc0d7119f3794aeddfa44881230d80

Grade 9 - 55

Post 9 - 55

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Grade 10 - 45

Post 10 - 45

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Grade 11 - 35

Post 11 - 35

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Grade 12 - 35

Post 12 - 35

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Reason

Grade 1 - 88

Post 1 - 77

A reasonably good post. It's a bit repetitious. You have a conclusion sentence in the middle of your post. And, while there is some new content beyond that, it seems to make the same point. Seems like you have embedded e.g.'s.

Comment 1 - 6

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 91

Post 2 - 82

Very nice post

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Comment 2 - 4

Comment 3 - 5

Grade 3 - 84

Post 3 - 74

Interesting post though not sure how this is related to remix and mashup. Typo in 3rd sentence; fourth sentence not grammatical d665071ee50adb5de225c057cf30c623

Comment 4 - 4

Comment 5 - 6

& nbsp;

Grade 4 - 90

Post 4 - 78

An ok post. There are some typos. For ex., I am not sure why you have a hyphen in the middle of a sentence. Your second sentence could be worded better. Your comment about you being able to do it is interesting and could be expanded. Good. b5b1fb39becc9cf0e04d56693bc19151

Comment 6 - 6

Comment 7 - 6

Grade 5 - 80

Post 5 - 75

Cool info. Unfortunately there are typos.

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Comment 8 (457) - 5

Grade 6 - 88

Post 6 - 76

Good. There are a number of typos

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Comment 9 (405) - 6

Comment 10 (402) - 6

Grade 7 - 83

Post 7 - 77

Good post - although there are a few typos.

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Comment 11 (45d) - 6

Grade 8 -83

Post 8 -77

Interesting post. It would be good if you could tie it in to the theme of the course.

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Comment 12 (45c) 6

Grade 9 - 86

Post 9 - 80

Good

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Comment 13 (464) - 6

Grade 10 - 74

Post 10 -74

Reasonably good. Some typos

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Grade 11 - 90

Post 11 - 90

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Grade 12 - 84

Post 12 - 84

Good post.

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Riffworks

Grade 1 - 94

Post 1 - 82

Really nice post.

Comment 1 - 7

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 85

Post 2 - 75

A nice post. There are a couple typos and the second sentence of the last paragraph is ungrammatical. Late submission

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Comment 2 - 4

Comment 3 - 6

Grade 3 - 78

Post 3 - 72

A nice find and interesting post. There are typos--for ex., you use know when you intended now. Late submission

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Comment 4 - 6

Grade 4

Post 4 - 83

Good post. Not exactly related to remix and mashup. 20482549c86abd6075fb4891160f7b61 & nbsp;

Grade 5

Post 5 - 85

Very cool

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Grade 6

Post 6 - 80

A good post. It is an excellent summary and opinion piece. However, the task was to remix this with another reading from the class.

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Grade 7

Post 7 - 81

Interesting but not completely related to remix & mashup.

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Roland

Grade 1 - 88

Post 1 - 77

Good post. The summary is good and so is your personal slant. It would have been nice to have a link to the original article.

Comment 1 - 6

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 87

Post 2 - 77

Very interesting post. Several times you have in to when you intended into. a2ab823e164d636402fbb125c4712a82

Comment 2 - 4

Comment 3 - 6

Grade 3 - 93

Post 3 - 82

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Comment 4 - 6

Comment 5 - 5

Grade 4 - 76

Post 4 - 76

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Grade 5 - 83

Post 5 - 77

Reasonable post

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Comment 6 - 6

Grade 6 -85

Post 6 - 75

not that related to the course

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Flurry of comments - 10

Grade 7

Post 7 - 69

too many posts for the week

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Grade 8 - 65

Post 8 - 65

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Grade 9 - 63

Post 9 - 63

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Grade 10 - 62

Post 10 - 62

Grade 11 - 62

Post 11 - 62

& nbsp;

Theremin

Grade 1 - 86

Post 1 - 75

A good summary. There are a few convoluted sentences. For example the fourth sentence of paragraph 2. The next paragraph misses a crucial point of that event.

Comment 1 - 6

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 87

Post 2 - 75

Interesting post. It would help if the web address were a real link. Some grammatical errors. For example, the second sentence of the second paragraph uses is when you intended in. In the next paragraph you change tense from sentence to sentence. That should remain consistent. f74d684096a024cf9088408c31645242

Comment 2 - 6

Comment 3 - 6

Grade 3 - 92

Post 3 - 80

Good topic and interesting post. There are a few typos. For ex., the 2nd sentence of the 3rd paragraph) bdf243072483c1ffd02b6ccbdf12139b

Comment 4 - 6

Comment 5 - 6

Grade 4 - 89

Post 4 - 82

Good Post. 11cea1f85a7af808ac4c39812ad45812

Comment 6 - 7

Grade 5 - 89

Post 5 - 83

Good post. A good job of connecting the recent video to others in class 69c008867a4c19444f925381004e6215

Comment 7 - 6

Grade 6 - 92

Post 6 - 86

Good post

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Comment 8 (459) - 6

Grade 7 - 92

Post 7 - 86

Yet another good post.

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Comment 9 (404) - 6

Grade 8 - 87

Post 8 - 81

typo on first line Other than that a good post

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Comment 10 (464) - 6

Grade 9 - 86

Post 9 - 86

Good post!

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Grade 10 - 83

Post 10 - 83

Good post 403-c4a366b6c011683b46356e9f81cc06f3

Grade 11 - 90

Post 11 - 90

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Grade 12 - 85

Post 12 - 85

Great post. thanks.

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Tracker

Grade 1 - 91

Post 1 - 80

Not bad. The post would have benefited from a careful read through and final edit. For example, the second sentence has a repeated word. A number of sentences are convoluted and just spending some time editing would have tightened things up. Content wise it would have helped to have a more general over-arching statement at the beginning as to what the main theme of the work is about.

Comment 1 - 6

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 86

Post 2 - -80

Interesting post with good specific information. A few infelicities.

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Comment 2 - 6

Grade 3 - 87

Post 3 - 75

An ok post. It would be nice if you described how this relates to mashups and remixes. It's a bit short.

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Comment 3 - 7

Comment 4 - 5

Grade 4 - 90

Post 4 - 79

A good interesting post. There are several typos but nothing major.

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Comment 5 - 5

Comment 6 - 6

Grade 5 - 88

Post 5 82

Good post, though I wanted the video linked to other things we read in class.

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Comment 7 - 6

Grade 6 - 91

Post 6 - 86

I like this post. It is just a weird case. f28e767a40f3695f4694a3261a5877e2

Comment 8 - 5

Grade 7 - 90

Post 7 - 85

Good post!

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Comment 9 (451)- 5

Grade 8 - 90

Post 8 - 83

Good post. A bit more detail would be helpful. 459-df40d054310c8778b19b92874794805a

Comment 10 (451) - 7

Grade 8 - 85

Post 8 - 79

Short and off the topic of the course, but cool nonetheless. 451-c310ebc29efd0b70a6bc4e83240ef28d

Comment 11 (451) - 6

Grade 9 - 87

Post 9 - 81

Good, interesting post.

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Comment 12 - (45d) 6

Grade 10

Post 10 - 84

Good post. just a few typos including the author's name.

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Grade 11 -82

Post 11 -82

Good post though a bit off-topic

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Grade 11 - 74

Post 11 - 74

title has a spelling error 4b3-a1ae78ee2389886b21f01cf5d6de2fe1

Yamaha

Grade 1 - 84

Post 1 - 72

Ok post. Some convoluted sentences. For example, the third sentence makes no sense to me. Many sentences could have been worded better. So, another cycle of proofreading and editing would have helped.

Comment 1 - 7

Initial bonus - 5

Grade 2 - 91

Post 2 -79

Good summary. You could improve this by expressing a bit of your opinion. It would be nice to make the link a real link someone could click on. 6b92458386c124efe830d695d870ab93

Comment 2 - 6

Comment 3 - 6

Grade 3 - 85

Post 3 -81

Good solid post e867f3317e3b57b1eaf8d74d2240b1a5

Comment 4 - 5

Grade 4 - 82

Post 4 -77

This was a good post. You have some typos--for ex., you use raise when you intended to use rise. The analysis is reasonable.

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Comment 5 - 5

Grade 5 -

Post 5 - 82

Good 3fe-edb5958366e68fd6a0c8cda9333405b1

Grade 6

Post 6 - 80

Reasonable post

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Grade 7

Post 7 - 81

Good post.

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Grade 8

Post 8 - 82

Good 3f0-4b02d3f90219cf386dc7aa9550669dde

Grade 9 - 90

Post 9 - 90

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Grade 10 -

Post 10 - 70

An okay post not completely related to the topic of the course. 4B1-45f7f24dfb179424634140a7df412202